Well for everyone who finished the book what about a different ending. Say that instead of the apprentice having his body deflated what about them bring the apprentice back to life and him return to his real mother. Boy 412 would still be Marcia's apprentice, but why have the apprentice dead. Also why not tell you what really happened to DomDaneils ship. Also tell you what happens to the dragon ship od HoTep Rah.